This is such an amazing game oh my goodness fhfhjsjf the way it perfectly balances angst, comedy, plot, and the romance?? I love how sad the protagonist is and how silly they can be with showing affection in any way fjsjjd it makes them endearing yknow? It makes you want to cheer for them
Awww thank you! I'm super glad you liked the MC, I'm relatively sure they'll be quite the same in that aspect in the rewritten demo :D But seriously, I'm aghast. I wrote something that can be classified as comedy?! I retire at this moment, satisfied.
Yippee!! I'm super excited to be able to play the rewritten demo fhsjf I hope progress is going well!! As for the comedy, the thing I remember that made me chuckle most was the whole interaction with Grey Horse in the stables XD
Yep, progress is going pretty well so far! I'm not sure at what point I want to release it (whether it'll be more satisfying for a new demo to at least include the to-be rewritten celen portion, or for me to release it sooner sometime during the journey there), but I like the changes most of the time lol. Like I'll read it to edit/add more writing one day and be smug about it, then the next, I'm wondering if I'm blind and word-deaf--but welp, that's life for you. I just want to release a completed IF to the best of my current abilities!
Ahaha, I didn't plan any of the horsing around but I couldn't help writing something dumb. Glad it wasn't boring and got a laugh out of someone :)
Pretty fun sofa r... Get it cause Sofa but also so far... I know I know, I'm the funniest person to ever exist, you may start clapping now. For real though this is pretty good so far, I have only read 1 chapter and a half but I like it, good writting.
Forgor to reply ๐. I quite enjoyed all chapters, chapter three is a bit weaker, yes, but it's sorta like calling frikin hulk weak, it's still pretty good. Source: Trust me bro.
Yeesh, this is all I aim for--having the chapters be liked rather than not haha. Thank you, it's great to hear you liked it overall! Still wanna clean things up, but I'm glad what's currently up is not a showcase of me deluding myself it shouldn't be torched and erased from all recollection :D
Trust you bro (my imposter syndrome says no way I can't believe it)
hahaha... So you don't want to believe me? You don't trust me??? Do you hate me???????? DO YOU HATE ME?!!?!?!?!?!?!?... No NO NONO YOu will believe ME or DIE๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช
Thanks for reading, I'm happy you like the characters! There will certainly be more Jackal once I update the public demo. I'm currently working on polishing that front before I push out more of chapter 4.
The Summoner will crash out & Jackal is your audience :D
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This is such an amazing game oh my goodness fhfhjsjf the way it perfectly balances angst, comedy, plot, and the romance?? I love how sad the protagonist is and how silly they can be with showing affection in any way fjsjjd it makes them endearing yknow? It makes you want to cheer for them
Awww thank you! I'm super glad you liked the MC, I'm relatively sure they'll be quite the same in that aspect in the rewritten demo :D
But seriously, I'm aghast. I wrote something that can be classified as comedy?! I retire at this moment, satisfied.
Yippee!! I'm super excited to be able to play the rewritten demo fhsjf I hope progress is going well!! As for the comedy, the thing I remember that made me chuckle most was the whole interaction with Grey Horse in the stables XD
Yep, progress is going pretty well so far! I'm not sure at what point I want to release it (whether it'll be more satisfying for a new demo to at least include the to-be rewritten celen portion, or for me to release it sooner sometime during the journey there), but I like the changes most of the time lol. Like I'll read it to edit/add more writing one day and be smug about it, then the next, I'm wondering if I'm blind and word-deaf--but welp, that's life for you. I just want to release a completed IF to the best of my current abilities!
Ahaha, I didn't plan any of the horsing around but I couldn't help writing something dumb. Glad it wasn't boring and got a laugh out of someone :)
best ga,em in the world no doubt
Pshhhh you're too kind. I'm glad you enjoyed!
i need more frl frl
Pretty fun sofa r... Get it cause Sofa but also so far... I know I know, I'm the funniest person to ever exist, you may start clapping now. For real though this is pretty good so far, I have only read 1 chapter and a half but I like it, good writting.
๐๐๐ Genius! Do stand up comedy or sit down if you have a sofa (please clap)
I'm happy you liked the beginning portions! I hope you like the latter ones too, but I feel ch3 is my weakest lol (cry)
Forgor to reply ๐. I quite enjoyed all chapters, chapter three is a bit weaker, yes, but it's sorta like calling frikin hulk weak, it's still pretty good. Source: Trust me bro.
Yeesh, this is all I aim for--having the chapters be liked rather than not haha. Thank you, it's great to hear you liked it overall! Still wanna clean things up, but I'm glad what's currently up is not a showcase of me deluding myself it shouldn't be torched and erased from all recollection :D
Trust you bro (my imposter syndrome says no way I can't believe it)
hahaha... So you don't want to believe me? You don't trust me??? Do you hate me???????? DO YOU HATE ME?!!?!?!?!?!?!?... No NO NONO YOu will believe ME or DIE๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช
"Don't want" is a strong word--dies ๐ชฆ
I'm so attached to Caine and so intrigued by Rei I wish Jackal's introduction chapter was longer because he's so mysterious
Thanks for reading, I'm happy you like the characters! There will certainly be more Jackal once I update the public demo. I'm currently working on polishing that front before I push out more of chapter 4.
The Summoner will crash out & Jackal is your audience :D
Thank you for your hardwork! I'm looking forward to future chapters~! ( โขฬ ฯ โขฬ )โง